My opinion: It sucks, the orginal song is like 1000 times better. sorry.
The lead you used was bullshit. the tempo was s bit low. etc.
No need to say sorry, I agree with you - it isn't the best, it's practically a few melodies I chucked together on FL for the hell of it.
Thanks for being honest.
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